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The diagram below show the campus of Riversdale university in1973 and in 2010.

The diagram below show the campus of Riversdale university in1973 and in 2010. 1XpG

The given layouts compare the information about the changes which occurred in the Riversadale university from 1973 to 2010. Overall, it is lucid that there were take place multifarious changes such as an area, that covered the trees and plants, was completely cleared and new and new building will be planned to construct in future. To begin with 1973, there was a natural reserve area in south -west direction, where grew a lot of trees was choped down in 2010. Students union's location remained unchanged, on the contrary there was a sports Center on the South Side of the students Union but it was relocated on North East direction of university new bridge had been built to increase the connectivity of medical school with others library which was in they right side of the river was extended and converted into L shape. Moving further, Social science and Law building were situated in the south-east direction in 1973 but in 2010, these were replaced into a building that was Law and Social building. In the North -West direction, Fine arts building was transformed into the a Information Science building in 2010. Other remaining palces such as Economics building, Administration building and Science building were remained unchanged until 2010.

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were remained
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