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The graph shows the spending on education,medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051.

The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. dG6X
The given line graph illustrates the information about the investment on various fields which are education, medical care and pension in a nation from 2001 to till 2051. Overall, it can be seen that the spending on pension will increased throughout the time period, while the expenses of medical care and education expected to be declined over time. Getting into details, the investment on education was 15% in 2001 and ot would be declined by 1% from 2011 to till 2051. Likewise, in 2001 nearly 11% of money is spent by government on medical care, although this proportion was rose to 12% in 2021. After that the percentage of investment would be fell down at around 4% between 2021 and 2051. Furthermore, the expenditure of pensions were remained similar at 6% in 2001 and 2021 but, it is examine that it will be grown-up from 6% to 18% in 2021 and 2051 respectively.
The
given
line graph illustrates the information about the investment on various fields which are education, medical care and pension in a nation from 2001 to till 2051.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that the spending on pension will
increased
throughout the time period, while the expenses of medical care and education
expected
to
be declined
over time. Getting into
details
, the investment on education was 15% in 2001 and
ot
would
be declined
by 1% from 2011 to till 2051.
Likewise
, in 2001
nearly
11% of money
is spent
by
government
on medical care, although this proportion was rose to 12% in 2021. After that the percentage of investment would be fell down at around 4% between 2021 and 2051.
Furthermore
, the expenditure of pensions
were remained
similar at 6% in 2001 and 2021
but
, it is
examine
that it will
be grown
-up from 6% to 18% in 2021 and 2051
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051.

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