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The graph shows the spending on education,medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051.

The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. dG6X

The given line graph illustrates the information about the investment on various fields which are education, medical care and pension in a nation from 2001 to till 2051. Overall, it can be seen that the spending on pension will increased throughout the time period, while the expenses of medical care and education expected to be declined over time. Getting into details, the investment on education was 15% in 2001 and ot would be declined by 1% from 2011 to till 2051. Likewise, in 2001 nearly 11% of money is spent by government on medical care, although this proportion was rose to 12% in 2021. After that the percentage of investment would be fell down at around 4% between 2021 and 2051. Furthermore, the expenditure of pensions were remained similar at 6% in 2001 and 2021 but, it is examine that it will be grown-up from 6% to 18% in 2021 and 2051 respectively.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line graph illustrates the information about the investment on various fields which are education, medical care and pension in a nation from 2001 to till 2051.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the spending on pension will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "increase"increase
increased
 throughout the time period, while the expenses of medical care and education This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be declined
 over time. Getting into This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, the investment on education was 15% in 2001 and Possible spelling mistake found.OToftoatonit
ot
 would be declined
 by 1% from 2011 to till 2051. Likewise
, in 2001 nearly
 11% of money is spent
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 on medical care, although this proportion was rose to 12% in 2021. After that the percentage of investment would be fell down at around 4% between 2021 and 2051. Furthermore
, the expenditure of pensions were remained
 similar at 6% in 2001 and 2021 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, it is Consider using a past participle here: "examined".examined
examine
 that it will be grown
-up from 6% to 18% in 2021 and 2051 respectively
. 