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The graph below shows the number of cars produced in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information below in your own words.

The table describes how many cars were made in Argentine, Australia and Thailand in 2003, 2006 and 2009. As can be observed from the table, the number of cars in the first country, Argentina, started at the lowest point in 2003 with 161, 176 cars made, comparing with itself in other years and two other countries in the table. In 2006, however, 432, 120 cars, rising triple comparing with 2003, were produced and that figure rose slightly to 512, 924 cars made in 2009. On the other hand, the number of automobiles made in Australia decreased during the period of time. Accounting for 413, 261 cars made in 2003, the amount of cars went down to 330, 906 in 2006 and then continued to decline double comparing to 2003 at 22, 283 at the end of the period. Finally, the number of cars produced in Thailand was 742, 062 and reached the top at 1, 194, 426 cars made in 2006. In 2009, there was a minor decrease with cars output, accounted for 999, 378 cars. In conclusion, Thailand is the country which produced cars most. The number of automobiles made in Argentina increased, meanwhile, that figure of Australia decreased during the period.
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at the lowest point in 2003 with 161, 176
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made, comparing with itself in other years and two other countries in the table. In 2006,
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, rising triple comparing with 2003,
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made in 2009.

On the other hand
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of automobiles made in Australia decreased during the period of time. Accounting for 413, 261
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made in 2003, the amount of
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went down to 330, 906 in 2006 and then continued to decline double comparing to 2003 at 22, 283 at the
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Finally
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of
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produced in Thailand was 742, 062 and reached the top at 1, 194, 426
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cars
made in 2006. In 2009, there was a minor decrease with
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output, accounted for 999, 378 cars.

In conclusion
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most. The
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of automobiles made in Argentina increased, meanwhile, that figure of Australia decreased during the period.
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