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The bar chart illustrates how emigrants from Britain were selected to five different locations, namely Australia, Spain, New Zealand, the USA, and France, from 2004 to 2007, measured by thousands.

The bar chart illustrates how emigrants from Britain were selected to five different locations, namely Australia, Spain, New Zealand, the USA, and France, from 2004 to 2007, measured by thousands. Overall, all features have shown different tendencies except for the numbers of emigrated to Spain and New Zealand. Another notable change is that the highest percentage was in Australia, while the least proportion was in New Zealand. Moving on to the details, the figure for British immigrants in Australia saw a fluctuation from just above 40 to 43, reaching a peak in 2006 at approximately 52. In contrast, the number of emigrants in New Zealand was the same as in the USA in 2004, which was almost twice less than in Australia. After a year, both numbers decreased to 23 and 19, respectively. While the figure for the USA experienced a downward trend from 19 to 20 in 2007, the proportion of people in New Zealand continued to decline to just above 21. In terms of Spain, the proportion of emigrated people in Spain began with 34 after witnessing a slight rose, meanwhile, the figure for France saw a comparable significant growth from 22 to the same number. After which both figures experienced the same trend, declining to 28 and 18, respectively.

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