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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below demonstrates the number of books read by people at the library between 2011 and 2014 Overall, the number of men reading books increased significantly. In contrast, the number of books read by women is fluctuate. In 2011, there were approximately 5000 books read by men and nearly 3000 books read by women. From 2011 to 2013, more and more men were likely to read books at the library, since their numbers grew up dramatically, by almost 7000 books. Meanwhile, there was a slight increase in the number of books read by women. And it had significant growth in 2012 and 2013 In 2013, both men and women reached the same books, about 10000 books. After that, more men like reading books, as a great increase from 10000 to 14000 books. On the other hand, the number of women reading books fell by 2000 books
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In 2011, there were approximately 5000
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. From 2011 to 2013, more and more
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were likely to
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at the library, since their
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. Meanwhile, there was a slight increase in the
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. And it had significant growth in 2012 and 2013

In 2013, both
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, about 10000
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. After that, more
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like reading
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, as a great increase from 10000 to 14000
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fell by 2000
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

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