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The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts depict three different sources of electricity namely fossil fuel, hydro power, nuclear power in four countries in the year 2003. A zigzag trend can be observed in the all four nations when using numerous forms of power genarating sources. Although, 82% fossil fuel was used in India yet just 14% and 4% hydro power and nuclear power was utilised respectively. On the contrary, Sweden used nuclear and hydro power at teh most being 44% and 52% respectively and just 4% fossil fuel was used. In Morocco and Vietnam, no use of nuclear power was observed. 95% of hydro power being the highest was used by Morocco. Vietnam used 56% fossil fuel and 44% hydro power. Overall, use of fossil fuel was at peak (82%) in India followed by Vietnam at 56%. However, in sweden and Morocco use of fossil fuel was at just 5% and less. On the other hand, Nuclear power was used almost 45% in Sweden. Whereas, no use of the same was made in nations like Morocco and Vietnam. Hydro power was utilised as a power source in all the four regions.
The pie charts depict three
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sources of electricity
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fossil
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fuel
, hydro
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power
, nuclear
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power
in four countries in the year 2003. A zigzag trend can
be observed
in the all four nations when using numerous forms of
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power
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genarating
sources.

Although, 82%
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fossil
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fuel
was
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used
in India
yet
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14% and 4% hydro
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power
and nuclear
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power
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utilised
respectively
.
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, Sweden
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used
nuclear and hydro
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power
at
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teh
most being 44% and 52%
respectively
and
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just
4%
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fossil
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fuel
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used
. In Morocco and Vietnam, no
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use
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power
was observed
. 95% of hydro
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being the highest was
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used
by Morocco. Vietnam
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used
56%
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fuel
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hydro power
.

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,
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fuel
was at peak (82%) in India followed by Vietnam at 56%.
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, in
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sweden
and Morocco
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5% and less.
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, Nuclear
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was
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used
almost 45% in Sweden. Whereas, no
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was made
in nations like Morocco and Vietnam. Hydro
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source in all the four regions.

IELTS academic The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003.

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188 words
6.0
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