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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate, sources of the electricity produced in four nations for the year 2003. Countries like India, Sweden, Morocco and Vietnam these are discussed in the charts. In India, the maximum source used to produce electricity is fossil fuel with 82%. Whereas, nuclear power (4%) is the minimum used source and hydro power stands at 14%. In sweden the most used source is hydro power with a little more than half percentage (52%). Second used is Nuclear power with 44% and least is Fossil fuel with 4%. In Morocco, Hydro power is used highest with 95%. On the other hand, Fossil fuel is just 5% and nuclear power is not used at all. In VIetnam a little more than half is used for Fossil fuel (56%). On the contrary, remaining is used for Hydro power which is 44% and again nuclear power is not produced at all. Therefore, different methods of the electricity are depicted in three colors. Firstly, fossil fuel in blue color, secondly, yellow color indicating hydro power and lastly, green color is for nuclear power.
The pie charts illustrate,
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of the electricity produced in four nations for the year 2003. Countries like India, Sweden, Morocco and Vietnam these
are discussed
in the charts.

In India, the maximum
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fossil
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with 82%. Whereas, nuclear
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(4%) is the minimum
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and hydro
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stands at 14%. In
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is hydro
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more than half percentage (52%). Second
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In Morocco, Hydro
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highest with 95%.
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5% and nuclear
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is not
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is not produced at all.

Therefore
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methods of the electricity
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in three colors.
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,
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fossil
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in blue
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,
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, yellow
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indicating hydro
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is for nuclear
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IELTS academic The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003.

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180 words
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