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The graph below shows the monthly Temperature and Precipitation in the year 2020. Write a report for a newspaper describing the information shown.

The graph below shows the monthly Temperature and Precipitation in the year 2020. Write a report for a newspaper describing the information shown. 0ALqG
The bar graph compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year 2020. It is noticeable from the graph that monthly figures for precipitation and temperatures vary considerably. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May. Between the months of January and May, average temperatures rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average rainfall also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May. While temperatures are relatively stable for the next four months, the amount of rainfall increases rapidly between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. From the final three months of the year, we can observe that there is a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.
The bar graph compares
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average
figures for
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temperature
and
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precipitation
over the course of a calendar year 2020.

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precipitation
and
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temperatures
vary
considerably
. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while
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temperatures
are highest in April and May.

Between the months of January and May,
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average
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temperatures
rise from their lowest point at around
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20°C
to a peak of
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30°C
.
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Average
rainfall
also
rises over the same period, from approximately
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20mm
of rain in January to
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100mm
in May.

While
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temperatures
are
relatively
stable for the
next
four months, the amount of rainfall increases
rapidly
between May and June. Figures for
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precipitation
remain above
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250mm
from June to September, peaking at around
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330mm
in July. From the final three months of the year, we can observe that there is a dramatic fall in
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precipitation
, to a low of about
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10mm
in December, and a steady drop in
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temperatures
back to the January
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average
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the monthly Temperature and Precipitation in the year 2020. Write a report for a newspaper describing the information shown.

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