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The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009.

The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. RNr3V

The both maps illustrated that the arrangement of a library in 2001 and 2009. Looking at the first map, the entrance door was on the southern side of a library. While crossed the door there were librarian's desks and on the right corner stairs were built and also left side of the desks, self helped area was available. After that history department was situated west side of a library. In the center of book room, tables were set up. Moreover newspaper and periodicals were on the east zone of beaches and on the upper side fiction was available. Looking at the second maps, tables were placed in the middle. Along with tables children's area and books zone was manufactured and also on the right corner history department, law, economic books and fiction and kitchen constructed near the children's area. Opposite side of that film, DVD's and computers were put up. In addition to it, librarian's desks and main door was built on southern side and stairs were located near the door.

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 there were librarian's desks and on the right corner stairs were built
 and also
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 that history department was situated
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Moreover
 newspaper and periodicals were on the east zone of beaches and on the upper side fiction was available. Looking at the second maps, tables were placed
 in the middle. Along with tables children's area and books zone was manufactured
 and also
 on the right corner history department, law, economic books and fiction and kitchen constructed near the children's area. Opposite side of that film, DVD's and computers were put
 up. In addition
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door
was built
 on southern side and stairs were located
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door
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