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This line graph outlines population growth patterns in China, India and the United States. All trends exhibit positive growth, albeit at different rates

This line graph outlines population growth patterns in China, India and the United States. All trends exhibit positive growth, albeit at different rates gWXAL
The above line graph illustrates population growth in China, India, the USA, with the more forth classification by level of papulation. overall, the chart comparing the papulation of three cities in terms of few peoples. The Chennai population increased by 600 million in 1950. The following growth 650 million peoples After slightly in the year increase 200 million people early 960's Chennai papulation it will growth accurately and increases the population 800 million in 1985. the Chennai population grow up to 1. 26 million people in 200. India also follows the same it will start at the 400 million in 1955 it will sell 430 in 1965 it will be developed highly 800 million in the early of 1990 the glow canceled with the year of 2000 do growing 1000 million peoples. The USA population could not grow it will increase slowly in the year of 1960 the population was 200 it will be growing slowly in the year 2000 also it will increases 250 million The population of the three countries is expected and continue into the possible future
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overall
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of three cities in terms of few peoples. The Chennai
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increased by 600
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in 1950. The following growth 650
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million
peoples

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200
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people
early 960's Chennai
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it
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800
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in 1985.
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Chennai
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grow up to 1. 26
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in 200.

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in 1955 it will sell 430 in 1965 it will
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highly
800
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of 2000
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1000
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peoples.

The USA
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could not grow it will
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increase
slowly
in the
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of 1960 the
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was 200 it will be growing
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2000
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250 million

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and continue into the possible future
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IELTS academic This line graph outlines population growth patterns in China, India and the United States. All trends exhibit positive growth, albeit at different rates

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