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Table shows underground railway system of 6 different cities.

Table shows underground railway system of 6 different cities. DwmoE

THE CHART REPRASENT THE RAILWAY SYSTEM IN DIFFERENT LOCATIONS. THE PASSENGERS PER YEAR ARE CALLIBERATED IN MILLIONS AND DISTANCE IN KILO METER OVERALL, IT IS CONSPICUOUS THAT, LONDON IS THE EARLIEST AND COVERS THE LARGEST DISTANCE. ON CONTRARY, KYOTO IS THE SHORTEST WITH A DECLINE RATE OF PASSENGERS PER YEAR FIRST, THE OLDEST METRO RAIL IS SITUATED IN LONDON. IT WAS ESTABLISHED IN THE YEAR 1863, COVERS AN AREA OF 394 KILOMETERS ALONG WITH 775 PASSENGERS PER YEAR. EVEN THOUGH, IT IS THE BIGGEST, TOKYO CARRIES 1927 PASSENGERS ANNUALLY BY STRETCHING OVER 155 KILOMETERS. THEY WERE INTRODUCED IN 1927. IN 1900, PARIS BROUGHT UP ANOTHER WHICH IS 199 KILOMETERS LONG WITH 1191 PASSENGERS IN AN YEAR. UPON THAT, IN 21ST CENTURY, LOS ANGELES HAS MADE THEIR UNDERGROUND RAIL IN 2001. IT IS SIGNIFICANTLY SHORTER AND TRAVELS ABOUT 28 KILOMETERS WITH PASSENGER RATE OF 50 MILLION PER YEAR. ALTHOUGH LOS ANGELES IS SMALLER, IT IS NOT THE SMALLEST. IN 1921, KYOTO RAISED THEIR PROJECT WITH JUST 11 KILOMETER DISTANCE INCLUDING 45 MILLION PASSENGERS FOR 365 DAYS. MORE OVER, WASHINGTON DC IN 1976 CREATED A LARGER NETWORK WITH 126 KILOMETER, HOWEVER, IT COMPRISED OF ONLY 144 MILLION PEOPLE PER YEAR.

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PASSENGERS
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PASSENGERS
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FIRST
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PASSENGERS
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YEAR
. EVEN THOUGH
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PASSENGERS
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PASSENGERS
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UPON THAT, IN 21ST CENTURY, Did you mean "Los Angeles"?Los Angeles
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PASSENGER
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MILLION
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YEAR
. ALTHOUGH Did you mean "Los Angeles"?Los Angeles
LOS ANGELES
 IS SMALLER, IT IS NOT THE SMALLEST. IN 1921, KYOTO RAISED THEIR PROJECT WITH This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
JUST
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MILLION
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PASSENGERS
 FOR 365 DAYS. MORE OVER, WASHINGTON DC IN 1976 CREATED A LARGER NETWORK WITH 126 KILOMETER, HOWEVER
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MILLION
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