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The graph below shows the increase in capacity of electricity generation from different types of renewable scurces in Continent A, between 2008 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the increase in capacity of electricity generation from different types of renewable scurces in Continent A, between 2008 and 2018. G9dWx
The bar graph illustrates the increase in capacity of electricity generation from different types of renewable sources in continent A during 2008 and 2018. Firstly, Solar energy was less popular in 2008. in 2010 a number of people were aware about it so, that time approx. 3% energy were contributed by it. Moreover, in 2013 solar produced energy same as other renewable sectors, it contributed almost 15% energy. After 2013 to 2015 there were 10% increased in production. In addition, after 2016 solar electricity generated almost 50% of supply electricity and 2018 solar energy was most popular at that time. Secondly, wind energy was contributed 5% production in 2008 which number double in 2010. Moreover, from 2011 wind energy accounted double every year till 2016 while in 2017 wind energy accounted almost 3 time increased at single year and that time wind energy has accounted highest production. Furthermore, hydropower was quiet popular during 2008 and that time hydropower contributed highest production compare to other renewable energy. hydropower was increase production slow and constant but they couldn't beat production of solar and wind energy after 2016. additionally, other renewable also produced small amount of energy but it were less popular during 2008 to 2018. All in all, solar energy has great potential during that period also wind and hydropower accounted considerable growth in both sector.
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sources in continent A during 2008 and 2018.

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Solar
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energy
was less
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in 2008.
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in
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approx. 3%
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energy
were
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, in 2013
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produced
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energy
same as other
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renewable
sectors, it
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contributed
almost 15%
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energy
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, after 2016
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electricity generated almost 50% of supply electricity and 2018
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was most
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Secondly
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wind
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was
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contributed
5%
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in 2008 which number double in 2010.
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double every year till 2016 while in 2017
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energy
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almost 3
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increased at single year and that
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has
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during 2008 and that
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hydropower
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contributed
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highest
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compare to other
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renewable
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hydropower
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slow and constant
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they couldn't beat
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of
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after 2016.
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additionally
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also
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it were less
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popular
during 2008 to 2018.

All in all,
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has great potential during that period
also
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and hydropower
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considerable growth in both sector.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the increase in capacity of electricity generation from different types of renewable scurces in Continent A, between 2008 and 2018.

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