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The digrams depict the information about the location and stracture of wave energy machine.

The digrams depict the information about the location and stracture of wave energy machine. aly6X
The digram depict the information about the location and stracture of wave energy machine. It can be vividly seen from the digram that nearly half of the machine located in the water and one side of machine is opened according to the water wave direction, through it water antered. Then in the lift side, through the water pressure air flow on the upper side and give moment to the turbine which are connected with electricity generator. The second diagram reveals that the location of machine. In the open place two outputs are sattled one is large wave high output and other one is small wave low output which installation high and low cost respectively. Between them the wave energy machines are located. Overall, it is clear that wave energy machine, designed with different tools if one is miss, then whole machine would helted and location of it depends on the wave direction
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digram
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depict
the information about the location and
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stracture
of
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wave
energy machine.

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vividly
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seen
from the
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digram
that
nearly
half of the
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machine
located in the
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water
and one side of
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machine
is opened
according to the
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water
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wave
direction, through it
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water
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antered
. Then in the lift side, through the
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water
pressure air flow on the upper side and give moment to the turbine which
are connected
with electricity generator.

The second diagram reveals that the location of
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machine
. In the open place two outputs are
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sattled
one is large
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wave
high output and other one is
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small
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wave
low output which installation high and low cost
respectively
. Between them the
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wave
energy
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machines
are located
.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that
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wave
energy
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machine
, designed with
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different
tools if one is miss, then whole
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machine
would
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helted
and location of it depends on the
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wave
direction

IELTS academic The digrams depict the information about the location and stracture of wave energy machine.

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4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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