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advancement of tourism explain advantages and disadvantages of tourism

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In today's world, due to the advancement in aeronautical engineering flying to other countries has become highly convenient and cost-friendly e as a result tourism has increased more than ever before. This to many is a blessing problem to some cultures and societies. for many for the blossoming of their economy & yet caused nation, today depends heavily on tourism as it needs very less capital & yet pays high on return on investment. Therefore governments around the globe spend much energy & effort in developing the tourism industry. Most visitors to other countries travel for leisuve purpose and to learn Almost every Or experience other cultures landscape & Climates. ate Tourism helps build bridges and events a mutual understanding apart from the financial benefit. Moreover, it also helps to create job opportunities in the hospitality industry as well as self-employment opportunities for the locals such as travel guides & logistics. It also provides a great opportunity for a country to portray its image in a positive manner to the outside world o re, Despite this, foreign cultures can make a negative impact on o society such as its unique identity & cultural ethics are at risk of being lost forever. furthermore, locals begin to rely too much on jobs generate -ed by these travelers & in turn local industries such as farming are threatened. Overall, such drawbacks can be easily avoided if governments mediate to mitigate the dis advantages e, thereby optimizing the benefits a country gets from promo ting tourism.

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