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the chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in americans in 1990. The data is calibrated in Dollar, USA currency per month.

the chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in americans in 1990. The data is calibrated in Dollar, USA currency per month. AwLQn
The supplied bar graph elucidates the proportion of the amount of money per week spent on fast foods by three economical levels in Americans in 1990. As a general trend, people who have high income spend 81 dollars in order to buy fast food, while people who have low income devote 40 dollars because of their earnings. As far as hamburger which people eat frequently in the USA is concerned, people in a group of high income payout 45 dollars to buy them; in contrast, Americans who have low income afford them by 15 dollars which is low budget in hamburger category. Furthermore, the group of high income spends 17 dollars so as to eat fish and chips; similarly, people who have low profit spend 17 dollars to afford it. Actually, there have been people who have average income, and they ordered hamburgers with 33 dollars. With regard to the other fast food which name is pizza, people with high income payout 19 dollars for buy pizza in a week; whereas, the group of low income people lavishes only 8 dollars in order to afford it. In addition, people with average income spend 10 dollars in order that they afford the pizza. Definitely, there is an anomaly in the amount of money per week in average income group, and they payout 25 dollars which is the highest in fish and chips category.
The supplied bar graph elucidates the proportion of the amount of money per week spent on
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foods by three economical levels in Americans in 1990.

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income
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spend
81
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in order to
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buy
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fast
food, while
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people
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who
have
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low
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income
devote 40
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dollars
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because
of their earnings.

As far as hamburger which
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people
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is concerned
,
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people
in a
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of
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high
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income
payout 45
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dollars
to
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buy
them;
in contrast
, Americans
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income
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afford
them by 15
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which is
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budget in hamburger category.
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17
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eat fish and chips;
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,
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profit
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spend
17
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to
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it. Actually, there have been
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have average
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, and they ordered hamburgers with 33 dollars.

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food which name is pizza,
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with
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payout 19
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for
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pizza in a week; whereas, the
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lavishes
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8
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in order to
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it.
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people
with average
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10
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dollars
in order that they
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afford
the pizza. Definitely, there is an anomaly in the amount of money per week in average
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income
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group
, and
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they payout
25
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which is the highest in fish and chips category.
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in americans in 1990. The data is calibrated in Dollar, USA currency per month.

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