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The graph below shows the figures for CFC emissions in four countries between 1989 and 2001

The graph below shows the figures for CFC emissions in four countries between 1989 and 2001 Bw3Qa

The chart below depicts the measures for CFC radiation in four regions in period from 1989 to 2001. Overall, at the beginning Poland and Ukraine had been dominant but later decreased dramatically while Egypt and Malaysia drops continuously. Poland had the biggest CFC emissions 5000 in 1989 and declined sharply in 1992 to 2800. The sharp plunge continued until stabilized in 2001. In second place was Ukraine with 4500 in 1989. Amount of CFC emissions fell rapidly until reached 900 in 1996. After that number of CFC increased slightly to 1200 in 2001. Malaysia started 3300 and had amount of fluctuations among the years. At first number of CFC remained constant in the 6 years’ period. Subsequently, the number fell off to 2000 in the end of period. The last country Egypt had the smallest CFC emissions among other countries. In Egypt, there is slight drop per years from 1989 to 1992. It then declined steadily to 1300 until 2001.

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Poland had the biggest CFC emissions 5000 in 1989 and declined sharply
 in 1992 to 2800. The sharp plunge continued until stabilized in 2001. In second place was Ukraine with 4500 in 1989. Amount of CFC emissions fell rapidly
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 that number of CFC increased slightly
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 3300 and had amount of fluctuations among the years. At first
 number of CFC remained constant in the 6 years’ period. Subsequently
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end
 of period. The last country Egypt had the smallest CFC emissions among other countries. In Egypt, there is slight drop per years from 1989 to 1992. It then declined steadily
 to 1300 until 2001. 