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THE DIAGRAM SHOW LIFE CYCLE OF THE SLIK WORM AND STAGES INVOLVED IN THE PRODUCTION OF SILK CLOTH.

THE DIAGRAM SHOW LIFE CYCLE OF THE SLIK WORM AND STAGES INVOLVED IN THE PRODUCTION OF SILK CLOTH. ORo0d
THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES STAGES INVOLVED IN THE LIFE CYCLE OF SILK WORM WHEREAS, TEHE PROCESS CHART REPRESENT VARIOUS STAGES INCLUDED THE MANUFACTURING OF SILK CLOTH. OVERALL, THE DIAGRAM IS DISTRIBUTED IN TWO MAJOR STEPS, FIRST IS NATURAL LIFE CYCLE OF SILK WORM AND PRODUCTION OF SILK CLOTH. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE INSECT ANMED AS MOTH LAYS HIS EGGS ON MULBERRY LEAF WHERE, THE EGG TAKES AROUND 10 DAYS TO FORM SILKWORM LARVA AND THIS LARVA EATS MULBERRY LEAF AS A FOOD. AFTER 4-6 WEEK, IT FORMS IN CIRCULAR SHAPE SURROUNDED BY SILK THREADS AND TAKES AROUND 3-8 DAYS TO FORM IN FULL SHAPE OF COCOON. FINALLY, TO BECAME A MOTH FROM COCOON IT CONSUMES APPROXIMATELY MORE THAN 2 WEEKS. THE DIAGRAM FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN SELECTIION PROCESS, THE COCOON IS SELECTED ON THE BASIS OF QUALITY AND REQUIREMENTS AND SELECTED COCOONS BOLIED IN WATER UNDER HUGE VESSEL FOR CERTAIN PERIOD. IN UNWING STAGE, AROUND 300-900 THREAD ARE OBATINED AFTER BOILING STEP AND IT READY FOR TWISTING STAGE WHERE, THE THREAD IS TWISTED. THEN, THE THREADS DYE IN CIRCULAR VESSEL AND WEAVE TO CREATE SILK CLOTH.
THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES
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STAGES
INVOLVED IN THE LIFE CYCLE OF
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SILK
WORM WHEREAS,
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TEHE
PROCESS CHART REPRESENT VARIOUS
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STAGES
INCLUDED THE MANUFACTURING OF
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SILK
CLOTH.

OVERALL
, THE DIAGRAM
IS DISTRIBUTED
IN TWO MAJOR STEPS,
FIRST
IS NATURAL LIFE CYCLE OF
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SILK
WORM AND PRODUCTION OF
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SILK
CLOTH.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE INSECT
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ANMED
AS MOTH LAYS HIS EGGS ON MULBERRY LEAF WHERE, THE EGG TAKES AROUND 10 DAYS TO FORM SILKWORM LARVA AND THIS LARVA EATS MULBERRY LEAF AS
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A FOOD
. AFTER 4-6 WEEK, IT FORMS IN CIRCULAR SHAPE SURROUNDED BY
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SILK
THREADS AND TAKES AROUND 3-8 DAYS TO FORM IN FULL SHAPE OF
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COCOON
.
FINALLY
,
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TO BECAME
A MOTH FROM
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COCOON
IT CONSUMES APPROXIMATELY MORE THAN 2 WEEKS.

THE DIAGRAM
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN
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SELECTIION
PROCESS, THE
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COCOON
IS SELECTED
ON THE BASIS OF QUALITY AND REQUIREMENTS AND SELECTED
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COCOONS
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BOLIED
IN WATER UNDER HUGE VESSEL FOR CERTAIN PERIOD. IN
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UNWING
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STAGE
, AROUND 300-900
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THREAD
ARE
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OBATINED
AFTER BOILING STEP AND IT READY FOR TWISTING
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STAGE
WHERE, THE
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THREAD
IS TWISTED
. THEN, THE THREADS DYE IN CIRCULAR VESSEL AND WEAVE TO CREATE
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SILK
CLOTH.

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