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Method trends on usa watching tv

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The graph illustrates use various technologies households in USA used in streaming television from the year 2004 to 2014. Overall, satellite and Internet showed considerable increasing trend throughout the period, while cable and broadcast dramatically had downward trend. Initialy, internet method utilization started started at the lowest, much bellow 40000 households. It experienced an upward trend and at the end of the period in 2014, it was leading with nearly 200000 families actively using it. To add on, the satellite, which had shown steady growth, whereby in 2004, jt was bellow 80000 suprisingly showed positive trend outracing broadcasting a year later and setlight and cable in 2010. It also ended up second preferred method at almost the highest with 120000 families accessed by the end of 2014. Downward trend was observed in cable and broadcast household usage. Slightly above 80000 households were using cable initially, the number increased to about 120000 families, reaching its pick in 2008 thereafter falling around 60000 households in 2014.

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