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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. b5NW
The given bar graph illustrates how to travel by using Train, Car, Tube and Bus in Europe city in 1969, 1980 and 2000. As the overview, there can be seen an upward trend on car while a downward trend on bus throughout the years and show fluctuations on train and tube during the period of time. Firstly, by cars, there is a rapid increment during three years. In 1960, the percentage is about 7 as well as in 1980 it shows more than triple. It is around 37% in 2000. Secondly, bus has been depicting quick decline over the period. Beginning of the time it shows almost 40%. In 1980it goes down by 15% and sharp 15% in 2000. Finally, train and tube get vary amounts. In 1960, 1989 and 2000 the percentages are about 17, 27 and 23 respectively. In the meanwhile, consumers use tube in 1960 as same percent as train in 1980. Tube exceeded in 2000 by 3% than 1980.
The
given
bar graph illustrates how to travel by using
Train
, Car,
Tube
and Bus in Europe city in 1969, 1980 and 2000.

As the overview, there can be
seen
an upward trend on car while a downward trend on bus throughout the years and
show
fluctuations on
train
and
tube
during the period of time.

Firstly
, by cars, there is a rapid increment during three years. In 1960, the percentage is about 7
as well
as in 1980 it
shows
more than triple. It is around 37% in 2000.

Secondly
, bus has been depicting quick decline over the period. Beginning of the time it
shows
almost 40%. In 1980it goes down by 15% and sharp 15% in 2000.

Finally
,
train
and
tube
get
vary amounts. In 1960, 1989 and 2000 the percentages are about 17, 27 and 23
respectively
. In the meanwhile, consumers
use
tube
in 1960 as same percent as
train
in 1980.
Tube
exceeded in 2000 by 3% than 1980.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

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