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The provided bar chart illustrates data of the portion of residents in Canada who granted currency to charity institution by five different age groups in two years (2000 and 2015). It is clear from the graph that people who aged above 35 to 65 and over Donated far more higher than donators who had 18 to 34 years old. The lowest proportion belonged to Canadian youth(18 to 24)in the years 2000 and 2015, while the most member of grantors in 2000 and 2015 concerned age 35to49 and 50to64, respectively. The figure of Canadian donators with age of 18 to 24 years for 2000 was two-fold greater than that of 2015. In that two years, the number of people who aged between 25 to 65 years and over granted money had a difference of one in twenty. In the same years, the portion of donators in the age of 35 to 49 versus 52 to 64 was almost exactly vice versa.

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 of 35 to 49 versus 52 to 64 was almost exactly vice versa. 