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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. O7Xy

The graph illustrates the number of passengers using Underground Station located in London. Overall, in the early morning, at 8. 00 has one of the highest amounts of traveler. Meanwhile, in the evening, at 18. 00, the graph displays the least amount of traveler within London Underground Station. Before Lunch, the graph sharply increased, in the period of 6 to 8, raising in quadruple of the original number which is 100 people. In contrast, from 8. 00 to 10. 00 indicates the lowering total of passengers at 400 to the number near 200. The rest of the times within the morning reveals a sign of steady increase until mid-day. After lunch, the line graph heavily lowered from 300 to 100, at first. However, it strikes up almost four times, between the 16 to 18. After 18, the graph fluctuated, rapidly goes down and then up, again. In the end, the total of those remaining at 22. 00pm has the number near 150 people.

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number
 of passengers using Underground Station located in London.

Overall
, in the early morning, at 8. 00 has one of the highest amounts of traveler. Meanwhile, in the evening, at 18. 00, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
graph
 displays the least amount of traveler within London Underground Station.

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Before
 Lunch, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
graph
sharply
 increased, in the period of 6 to 8, raising in quadruple of the original You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 which is 100 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. In contrast
, from 8. 00 to 10. 00 indicates the lowering total of passengers at 400 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 near 200. The rest of the times within the morning reveals a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 of steady increase until mid-day.

After lunch, the line You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
graph
heavily
 lowered from 300 to 100, at first
. However
, it strikes up almost four times, between the 16 to 18. After 18, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
graph
 fluctuated, rapidly
 goes down and then up, again. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, the total of those remaining at 22. 00pm has the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 near 150 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. 