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The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for years 2000 and 2015. WRwW

The bar chart provides information about the amount of people in Canada who rendered money to charities by age range for 15 years from 2000 to 2015. Overall, the percentage of Canadian donors aged 18-49 years in 2000 is much higher than in 2015. But this can not be said about people over the age of 50. Turning to 2015, the age of 50 to 64 had reached above 35% of the donation. Moreover, 65 and over had donated more wealth, about 35%. On the contrary, the age 49 below had lowered their will of donation. In detail, 35 to 49 lowered to 34%, and 25 to 34 had declined to 25%. Furthermore, 18 to 24 had fallen to 11%. As a result, in 2015, the age 50 above had increased their willingness to donate their money. In particular, there’s a slight drop in a donation at both age 35 to 49 and 25 to 34. Undoubtedly, the majority of Canadians had declined the readiness to donate.

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, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
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, the majority of Canadians had declined the readiness to donate. 