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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some differen kinds of meati in European country between 1979 and 2004

The line graph illustrates per people consumed fish and some different meat products (beef, chicken, lamb) in European countries from 1979 to 2004. Overall, while Chicken increased rapidly, beef showed a reduction, and fish stayed constant between 1979 and 2004 In 1979, while chicken and lamb were well under 150 gramm, fish was just over 500 gramm,  and beef was approximately 225 gramm. After 10 years, beef showed a decrease, and chicken grew. Subsequently, they were equal gramm. Fish remained stable. In contrast, lamb showed a fall. In 1999, chicken showed a rise in contrast, beef and lamb dipped considerable. Fish remained unchanged. After 5 years, chicken rose, and it was 250 gramm.  Beef showed a reduction, and it was just over 100  gramm. Lamb showed a decline, and it was approximately 60 gramm.  Fish did not change, and it was 50 gramm in 2004.
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in European countries from 1979 to 2004.

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a reduction, and fish stayed constant between 1979 and 2004

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were well under 150
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, fish was
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over 500
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and
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was approximately 225
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. After 10 years,
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a decrease, and chicken grew.
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. Fish remained stable.
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a fall.

In 1999, chicken
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a rise 
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and
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dipped considerable. Fish remained unchanged. After 5 years, chicken rose, and it was 250
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 Beef
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a reduction, and it was
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in 2004.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some differen kinds of meati in European country between 1979 and 2004

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