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The graph below shows the changes in the places where people used to surf the Internet in the years 1998, 2000, 2002 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The depicts chart indicates people, who used internet in different kind of places in given period 1998, 2002, 2004 and 2000. It used internet in home, work, library, college. Foremost, the figure of 12% people who used their internet in library during 1998. while 18 % data used in 2000. It was a small decrease 15% in 2002. and, share same percentage in 2004. in 1998 and 2000 people used lower than 30% at work place and followed by 2002 it was slightly down in 2004. college people used most internet during 2002. As per work place in college people used internet for academic use to share the same percentage, which was 20%. Initiating at 24% of people who used in college, it is falling by 17 % in 2004. Moreover, Most of the folk, who used their internet for leisure time when they at home, the highest used internet service in the UK at home. in 2004. It was reached around 65 %, however it is falling only 1 % in 1998. Overall, in the UK survey, internet used hover 65% to 12% for 4 different places between 1998 and 2004.

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