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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. DloRW
The line graph shows the average number of people travelling by car, bus, and by train in UK between 1970 and 2030. Overall, in this graph we can see that people travelling by bus, car, and train. in this graph it is clearly shown that by every year from 1970 to 2030 there has been change in very large number in people who are travelling. in this graph there has shown three diffrent line in diffrent colours which are blue shows people travelling by car, green shows people travelling by bus and orange shows people travelling by train. Ther in the starting in 1970 there is all three are on same stand, after that people travelling by car which is showen in blue line is starts to increase and by the year 2030 it is on the highest level, and people travelling by bus starts to go downwards, and people travelling by train goes upwards. So, we can see that there has been change in people travelling by car increase, people travelling by bus decrease and people travelling by train increase then people travel by bus.
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in UK between 1970 and 2030.

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after that
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which is
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goes upwards.

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increase,
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by bus decrease and
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travel by bus.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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