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The graph below shows the average co2 emissions per person in 4 European countries between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows the average co2 emissions per person in 4 European countries between 1967 and 2007 25VnJ
The line graph compares 4 countries in terms of co2 emission from 1967 to 2007. Overall, four country experienced different trend in the time period. While co2 emission in Italy and Portugal rose, the amount decreased for UK and Sweden over the time. As the graph shows, Italy’s co2 emission started at just over 4 metric tones in 1967 followed by a steady increase to around 6 tons in 1977. Then, it inclined steadily until it stabilised to just under 8 tons in final year. Regarding Portugal’s emission, in 1967 this figure started with nearly 1 ton. This figure increased steadily until 1987 and was just under 4 tons. However, This figure rose to 5 metric tons in following year amd saw an slight increase to just over 5 metric tons at the end of time period. By contrast, in 1967 uk produced around 11 tons of co2 which was by far the highest amount. Afterwards, this figure fell to under 9 in 2007. Lastly, Sweden started their journy with nearly 9 tones in 1967 followed by a steady growth to just over 10 tons in the next year, however, this figure plunged to 7 to in 1987. Then, it declined steadily to around 5 tones in 2007
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trend in the time period. While co2
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in Italy and Portugal rose, the amount decreased for UK and Sweden
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4 metric tones in 1967 followed by a steady increase to around 6 tons in 1977. Then, it inclined
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rose to 5 metric tons in following year
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average co2 emissions per person in 4 European countries between 1967 and 2007

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