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line graph of island and cruise staying tourists in Caribbean islands

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The line graph illustrates the total number of foreigners (measured in millions) who visited Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017. overall, although the people who stayed in lands had few fluctuations at the initial four years, they managed to surpass the numbers of the cruise ship stayed people at the final year. In the beginning, island visitors accounted for nearly 0. 7 million as against the cruise lovers of 0. 3 million which both totaling to 1 million visitors. Thereafter, tourists in the island showed a steep surge of two-fold to 1. 5 million in 2013 whereas cruising lodgers displayed gradual fluctuations and stood at half a million in the same year; however, both sum up to 2 million visitors by the end of the year. In 2014, the number of islanders was plateaued until 2015 at 1. 5 million levels whereas the cruise crowed climbed up steadily up to nearly 1. 3 million, and accordingly, both tourists accounted for 2. 7 million at the end of 2015. Surprisingly, the interest of tour lovers to the island was declined by around 0. 2 million in 2016, but the situation stabilized and ended at the same level in 2017 to 1. 5 million visitors. Meanwhile, cruise ship visitors managed to exceed the visitors level of the Carribian island stayed people in 2016 and continued its peak stage on 2 million at the final year, According to both categories, the total figure leveled off at 2. 7 million. In contrast, the final year the same hit its highest level of 3. 5 million which was three times higher in comparison with 2010.
The line graph illustrates the total number of foreigners (measured in
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millions)
who visited Caribbean
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islands
from 2010 to 2017.

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overall
, although the
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people
who stayed in lands had few fluctuations at the initial four years, they managed to surpass the numbers of the
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cruise
ship stayed
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people
at the final year.

In the beginning,
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island
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visitors
accounted for
nearly
0. 7
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million
as against the
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cruise
lovers of 0. 3
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million
which both totaling to 1
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million
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visitors
. Thereafter, tourists in the
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island
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showed
a steep surge of two-fold to 1. 5
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million
in 2013 whereas cruising lodgers displayed gradual fluctuations and stood at half a
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million
in the same
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year
;
however
, both sum up to 2
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million
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visitors
by the
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end
of the year.

In 2014, the number of islanders
was plateaued
until 2015 at 1. 5
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million
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levels
whereas the
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cruise
crowed climbed up
steadily
up to
nearly
1. 3
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million
, and
accordingly
, both tourists accounted for 2. 7
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million
at the
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end
of 2015.
Surprisingly
, the interest of tour lovers to the
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island
was declined
by around 0. 2
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million
in 2016,
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but
the situation stabilized and ended at the same
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level
in 2017 to 1. 5
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million
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visitors
. Meanwhile,
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cruise
ship
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visitors
managed to exceed the
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visitors
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level
of the
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Carribian
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island
stayed
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people
in 2016 and continued its peak stage on 2
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million
at the final
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year
, According to both categories, the total figure leveled off at 2. 7
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million
.
In contrast
, the final
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the same hit its highest
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level
of 3. 5
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million
which was three times higher
in comparison
with 2010.
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