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The chart below shows the percentage of population and type of house where live in a 3 areas in a city

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The tabular chart compares the population and housing of three areas of a city. Overall, the population in central area, Green Park area and Southberg area are shown almost similar. Whereas, there is considerable difference in the choice of housing. On having a keen glance on data, the population of the given three areas are experienced at around 32, 000. 39% of the population of central area lives in detached houses. This is sharp contrast to Green Park area where only a small majority (5%) lives in detached houses. Even in the Southberg area, around 14% of resides in detached houses. The semi detached house are less popular in all three areas. With 28% of central area people living there and 5% each of Green Park area are living there. As far as more than half of Southberg masses likes to live in terraced. Approximately less than fifths people of Green Park and 18% of central area people living there. A large majority of Green Park area individuals (76%) stay in flats, where as only a quarters of the population of Southberg areas stay in apartments. Flats are less liked by the central area people where 15% of masses who are interested to live.
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and housing of three
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areas
of a city.
Overall
, the
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population
in
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central
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area
,
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Green
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Park
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area
and
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Southberg
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area
are shown
almost similar.
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, there is considerable difference in the choice of housing.
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population
of the
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three
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are experienced
at around 32, 000. 39% of the
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population
of
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central
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area
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detached
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houses
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Green
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Park
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where
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detached
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. Even in the
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Southberg
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, around 14% of resides in
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detached
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houses
. The semi
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detached
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house
are less popular in all three
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areas
. With 28% of
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central
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area
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living there and 5% each of
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Green
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Park
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are living there.
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masses likes to
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in terraced. Approximately less than fifths
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people
of
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Green
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Park
and 18% of
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central
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area
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people
living there. A large majority of
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Green
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Park
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area
individuals (76%) stay in flats,
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Southberg
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stay in apartments. Flats are less liked by the
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central
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area
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people
where 15% of masses who
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live
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of population and type of house where live in a 3 areas in a city

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