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The graph below shows the average calorie intake per person in eight countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented graph indicates the people, who eat foods and measure caliories in their foods. Mortals were consumption caliories in 8 various country. First and foremost, The united state of america mortals, who take highest caliories compared to other countries because american folk mostly use meat in their meal, which was 3400 per person in 2003. New Zeland share alomost same consumption, they folk consume about 200 caliories less than unitedstates. In 2003, other countries like span and mexico people were consume slightly higher than 2500 caliores, who take in one day per person. And the other side indian people eat more vegetarian food rather than non vegetarion food and that's reason, they had not consume good caliories like Newzeland. In 2003 china get upward trend than india, which country people take 2200 caliores roughly. In lowerside, indonesia and somalia were consume least caliories they take roughly 1500 caliories per person. To sumup, it can be see consumption of every country between 1800 and 3400 from2003.
The presented graph indicates the
people
, who eat
foods
and measure
caliories
in their
foods
. Mortals were consumption
caliories
in 8 various country.

First
and foremost, The united state of
america
mortals, who take highest
caliories
compared to other
countries
because
american
folk
mostly
use
meat in their meal, which was 3400 per person in 2003. New
Zeland
share
alomost
same consumption,
they folk
consume
about 200
caliories
less than
unitedstates
. In 2003, other
countries
like span and
mexico
people
were
consume
slightly
higher than 2500
caliores
, who take in one day per person. And the other side
indian
people
eat more vegetarian
food
rather
than non
vegetarion
food
and that's reason, they had not
consume
good
caliories
like
Newzeland
.

In 2003 china
get
upward trend than
india
, which
country
people
take 2200
caliores
roughly.

In
lowerside
,
indonesia
and
somalia


were
consume
least
caliories
they take roughly 1500
caliories
per person.

To
sumup
, it can be
see
consumption of every
country
between 1800 and 3400 from2003.
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