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The pie charts illustrate the amount of three different types of nutrients taken in typical meals inside the USA as percentage wise on an average basis.

The pie charts illustrate the amount of three different types of nutrients taken in typical meals inside the USA as percentage wise on an average basis. Overall, sodium and saturated fat have more consumption during the dinner whereas; added sugar is taken during the snacks. All the three nutrients consumed less during the breakfast time. Firstly, sodium is less during the breakfast and snacks time with percentage tying each other at fourteen percent. It rocketed during the night time with major forty three percentage share. Saturated fat shows same pattern with percentage slightly more during breakfast and snacks time than sodium and also major part goes during the night times. Both are taken second highest during the lunch times. On the other hand, added sugar consumed more during the snacks, with same percentage as of saturated fat during the mornings at sixteen percent share. Consumption during the dinner time is the second favorite time of added sugar with amount standing at twenty three percent.
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have more consumption during the dinner whereas;
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than sodium and
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during the mornings at sixteen percent share. Consumption during the dinner
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is the second favorite
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the amount of three different types of nutrients taken in typical meals inside the USA as percentage wise on an average basis.

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