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The chart below gives information about language taught in primary schools in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the min features, and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart demonstrates the data on the most popular languages taught in elementary school in Australia. Overall, the data indicates that Mandarin is the largest language taught for students, while the opposite is true for Spanish. It can be seen from the graph that Mandarin is the most prominent language that students trained at primary school with 20 thousand students. This is followed by Italian, Arabic, French, and Vietnamese, which accounts for 15 thousand, 10 thousand, 8 thousand, and 6 thousand students, correspondingly. By comparison, Spanish and Aboriginal languages are languages which have the lowest language taught in all 10 languages with 1. 5 thousand and 2 thousand students, respectively. Exactly 4. 5 thousand students who educated Japanese in elementary school. Under 4. 5 thousand students of primary school students of Australia report that they learned Greek, and Indonesian. Interestingly, the number of elementary school students learned 13 times as Mandarin as Spanish.
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, while the opposite is true for Spanish.

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trained at primary
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with 20 thousand
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taught in all 10
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with 1. 5 thousand and 2 thousand
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,
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who educated Japanese in elementary
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of primary
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of Australia report that they learned Greek, and Indonesian.
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, the number of elementary
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learned 13 times as Mandarin as Spanish.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about language taught in primary schools in Australia.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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