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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. BVM5

The line graph provides information on the waste production of three firms over the past 15 years. The quantity of waste generated is measured in tonnes. Company A has create the most amount of waste through the whole documented period with just a slight downward trend towards the end. Around 8 tonnes of wasted was produced by company B during the initial years and reached a peak in 2005 with approximately 10 tonnes and from then on, they began gradually declining with producing only 3 tonnes by the end. It appears that company C started out good but has experienced an enormous upward tendency with 3 tonnes to roughly around 10 tonnes of waste. Overall, the performance of company B was highly notable and company C which was generating the least amount in the primary years, has started creating a damaging impact on the environment by the end of the documented period.

The line graph provides information on the waste production of three firms over the past 15 years. The quantity of waste generated is measured
 in tonnes.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
Company
 A has Use past participle here: "created".created
create
 the most amount of waste through the whole documented period with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a slight downward trend towards the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Around 8 tonnes of wasted was produced
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 B during the initial years and reached a peak in 2005 with approximately 10 tonnes and from then on, they began gradually
 declining with producing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 3 tonnes by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

It appears that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 C This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 out This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 has experienced an enormous upward tendency with 3 tonnes to roughly around 10 tonnes of waste.

Overall
, the performance of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 B was highly
 notable and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 C which was generating the least amount in the primary years, has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 creating a damaging impact on the environment by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the documented period. 