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hree possible locations for a leisure centre

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Overall, in the map provided three sites which are A, B, and C for leisure center construction. Also, delta of river and transportation link is located in the map however, the site is not crowded or even populated. according to the information locations A and B both have transportation link with road and located in the bank of river. While in the territory of location A is plant, which consists of five round buildings and two high tubes. Moreover, it produces a large amount of exhaust fumes. In the location B is located three houses without any infrastructure. there are fields nearby location B. according to the data location C is on the left side of the map. location C is the furthest one from the riverside and road links, however there a lot of green forest. The territory C located in the highland in comparison with sites A and B.
Overall
, in the map provided three sites which are A, B, and C for leisure center construction.
Also
, delta of river and transportation link is
located
in the map
however
, the site is not crowded or even populated.

according
to the information
locations
A and B both have transportation link with road and
located
in the bank of river. While in the territory of
location
A is plant, which consists of five round buildings and two high tubes.
Moreover
, it produces a large amount of exhaust fumes. In the
location
B is
located
three
houses
without any infrastructure.
there
are fields nearby
location
B.

according
to the data
location
C is on the
left
side of the map.
location
C is the furthest one from the riverside and road links,
however
there
a lot of
green forest. The territory C
located
in the highland
in comparison
with sites A and B.
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IELTS academic hree possible locations for a leisure centre

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3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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