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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. rQWp
The pie charts beneath represent the five type of common household disbursements in the provinces of Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. As meticulously mentioned in the charts, Firstly, in Malaysia housing was the greatest expenditure around 34%, while, in Japan housing accounted for merely 21%. In contrast, in Japan other goods and services consisted of majorly 29%. On contrary, this disbursement slightly decreased to 26% just two-fold down fall fraction was reported. At the same time, food was contributed to 27% in Malaysia means it occupied second large position of expenditure. However, in Japan food disbursement fell to 24%. Astonishingly, transport was quiet low rather than other things accounted just 10% in Malaysia. Oppositely, in Japan Transportation utilized by people greatly around 20%. Last though very far from least, health care expenditure reported extremely least in the both countries. However, In Japan it consist of 6% better than Malaysia due to the fact of health care disbursement experienced major downfall merely 3%. To conclude, there were myriad of changes happened in expenditures of both of the provinces. However, Malaysia was in leading position than Japan in the year 2010.
The pie charts beneath represent the five type of common household
disbursements
in the provinces of
Japan
and Malaysia in the year 2010.

As
meticulously
mentioned in the charts,
Firstly
, in Malaysia housing was the greatest
expenditure
around 34%, while, in
Japan
housing accounted for
merely
21%.
In contrast
, in
Japan
other
goods
and services consisted of
majorly
29%. On contrary, this
disbursement
slightly
decreased to 26%
just
two-fold down fall fraction
was reported
. At the same time, food
was contributed
to 27% in Malaysia means it occupied second large position of
expenditure
.
However
, in
Japan
food
disbursement
fell to 24%.
Astonishingly
, transport was quiet low
rather
than other things accounted
just
10% in Malaysia.
Oppositely
, in
Japan
Transportation utilized by
people
greatly
around 20%. Last though
very
far from least, health care
expenditure
reported
extremely
least in the both countries.
However
, In
Japan
it
consist
of 6% better than Malaysia due to the fact of health care
disbursement
experienced major downfall
merely
3%.

To conclude
, there were myriad of
changes
happened in
expenditures
of both of the provinces.
However
, Malaysia was in leading position than
Japan
in the year 2010.
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