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The graph below shows the amount of imported foods in US dollars, in four nations in the years 2005, 2010 and 2015.

The graph below shows the amount of imported foods in US dollars, in four nations in the years 2005, 2010 and 2015. ndY8P
The bar graph provides information about the average number of food items in US dollars that are buy in four countries in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Overall, India imported least amount of subsistence in all three years, whereas in US the ratio is at peak. In 2015 importation of food stuff is high, that is, more than 120000 US $ in United States and 100000 in China. Furthermore, slightly above 100000 in China and just 20000 in India. In the year 2010, the import is not either much higher or lower; it ranged from 0 to 100000. Numerically, it is less than 100000, more than 40000, 60000 and between 0-20000 in United States, United Kingdom, India and China respectively. In 2005, India was the only country which imported least food, only 5000 whereas US was at the top with approximately 70000. In UK, above $ 40000 and 20000 US dollar in China.
The bar graph provides information about the average number of food items in US dollars that are
buy
in four countries in 2005, 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, India imported least amount of subsistence in all three years, whereas in US the ratio is at peak.

In 2015 importation of food stuff is high,
that is
, more than 120000 US $
in United States
and 100000 in China.
Furthermore
,
slightly
above 100000 in China and
just
20000 in India. In the year 2010, the import is not either much higher or lower; it ranged from 0 to 100000.
Numerically
, it is less than 100000, more than 40000, 60000 and between 0-20000
in United States
, United Kingdom, India and China
respectively
.

In 2005, India was the
only
country which imported least food,
only
5000 whereas US was at the top with approximately 70000. In UK, above
$ 40000
and 20000 US dollar in China.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amount of imported foods in US dollars, in four nations in the years 2005, 2010 and 2015.

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