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PLAN A BELOW SHOWS A HEALTH CENTRE IN 2005. PLAN B SHOWS THE SAME PLACE IN THE PRESENT DAY

PLAN A BELOW SHOWS A HEALTH CENTRE IN 2005. PLAN B SHOWS THE SAME PLACE IN THE PRESENT DAY ndQVe

The two plans, A and B, depict the renovation of a health center in two years 2005 and the present. Over the time period given, the health center has undergone significant modifications. To satisfy the demand, the center has been clearly expanded and its layout has been altered. In 2005, the main entrance was in front of the health center, and there were 12 parking spaces outside. Consultation counter along the hallway, which was accessible from the main door. A reception desk was located at the end of the hallway. On the left of the desk, there was an office and a consultation room, and on the right, there were two more consultation rooms. Behind the desk, a physiotherapy room was constructed. In the present day, the center's layout has been changed. The main entrance, which includes a reception desk and a play area for children, is now located in the left corner of the center. There is a huge common area in the center of the building with benches along the wall. The common area now has all of the original rooms as well as a newly added room known as the minor operations room. The car park was expanded by 30 spots.

The two plans, A and B, depict the renovation of a health center in two years 2005 and the present.

Over the time period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
, the health center has undergone significant modifications. To satisfy the demand, the center has been clearly
 expanded and its layout has been altered
.

In 2005, the main entrance was in front of the health center, and there were 12 parking spaces outside. Consultation Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "counters".counters
counter
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desk
was located
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end
 of the hallway. On the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
, there was an office and a consultation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, and on the right, there were two more consultation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
. Behind the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
, a physiotherapy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
was constructed
.

In the present day, the center's layout has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. The main entrance, which includes a reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
 and a play area for children, is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 located in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner of the center. There is a huge common area in the center of the building with benches along the wall. The common area This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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all of the
 original You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
as well
 as a newly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 known as the minor operations You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. The car park was expanded
 by 30 spots. 