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sumerise pie chart and bar chart

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The bar chart provides information about the percentage of overweight or obese adults, while the pie chart sorts the adult population depends on weight range. The bar chart contains six various parts from 1965 to 2015 every ten years. On the other hand, the pie chart only illustrates separate categories in one single year which is 2015. Firstly, we can see a steady rise in the bar chart in this half-century period. In the 1965s the percentage was reported approximately 45% and it was about 80%. The most noticeable increase was in the 1995s. After the 1995s, the proportion has grown rapidly. The last bar of this chart was for the 2015s that is represented in more detail in the pie chart. The pie chart has made of 4 sections. Individuals who are overweight are a little over a third of the population. Furthermore, the minority part is for severely obese by 6%. There is a point marked by both diagrams that only about one in three are healthy and underweight.
The bar
chart
provides information about the percentage of overweight or obese adults, while the
pie
chart
sorts the adult population depends on weight range. The bar
chart
contains six various parts from 1965 to 2015 every ten years.
On the other hand
, the
pie
chart
only
illustrates separate categories in one single year which is 2015.

Firstly
, we can
see
a steady rise in the bar
chart
in this half-century period. In the 1965s the percentage
was reported
approximately 45% and it was about 80%. The most noticeable increase was in the 1995s. After the 1995s, the proportion has grown
rapidly
. The last bar of this
chart
was for the 2015s that
is represented
in more detail in the
pie
chart.

The
pie
chart
has made of 4 sections. Individuals who are overweight are a
little
over a third of the population.
Furthermore
, the minority part is for
severely
obese by 6%. There is a point marked by both diagrams that
only
about one in three are healthy and underweight.
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