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THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CENTER OF A SMALL TOWN CALLED ISLIP FROM 2005 TO 2010

THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CENTER OF A SMALL TOWN CALLED ISLIP FROM 2005 TO 2010 JKjlE
The two maps describe how a small town named Islip is planned to change from 2005 to 2010. The layout of this center varied considerably, according to the development plan. More amenities were built, and the transportation system modernized. Schools and parking remain in their place. Infrastructure demolished to make room for substantial developments to the north of the map. On the west side of the map, near the shopping center and the automobile parking lot, there were bus stops. The new home will be built just across from the car parking lot, giving the impression of a pedestrian-only street. Along the pedestrian road, shops will be easily located. In the south to the map, this area remained the current structure, yet a new housing was built between the existing housing and the new parking space and the carriageway directing to the current housing area.
The two
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Islip
is planned
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from 2005 to 2010.

The layout of this center varied
considerably
, according to the development plan. More amenities
were built
, and the transportation system modernized. Schools and
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parking
remain in their place.

Infrastructure demolished to
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make
room for substantial developments to the north of the
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map
. On the west side of the
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map
, near the shopping center and the automobile
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parking
lot, there were bus
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stops
. The new home will
be built
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just
across from the car
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parking
lot, giving the impression of a pedestrian-
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only
street. Along the pedestrian road, shops will be
easily
located.

In the south to the
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map
, this area remained the
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current
structure,
yet
a new housing
was built
between the existing housing and the new
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parking
space and the carriageway directing to the
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current
housing area.

IELTS academic THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CENTER OF A SMALL TOWN CALLED ISLIP FROM 2005 TO 2010

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145 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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