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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. mg3L
The graph provides information about the growth of population in India and China starting from 2000 and the estimated rate until 2050. Overall, India experienced an upward trend until 2020 and it is forecasted to rise gradually by 2050, whilst China saw a steady increase in its growth until 2020, and yet it is expected to decline slightly after having a peak in the middle of 2020. In 2000, India had almost 1 billion population, with a considerable increase, this number reached over 1. 3 billion in twenty years. In 2030, population growth in India is predicted to intersect with the figure for China which will be over 1. 4 million. Until 2050, this number is expected to grow just under 1. 6 billion people. In terms of China, in 2000, the rate of population in between 1. 2 billion and 1. 3 billion, and it rose to moderately over 1. 4 billion in 2020. From this date to 2030, this rate is predicted to level off over 1. 4 billion and is dropped slightly just under 1. 4 billion in the last year.
The graph provides information about the growth of
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in India and China starting from 2000 and the estimated rate until 2050.

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, India experienced an upward trend until 2020 and it
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to rise
gradually
by 2050, whilst China
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a steady increase in its growth until 2020, and
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it is
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expected
to decline
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after having a peak in the middle of 2020.

In 2000, India had almost 1
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billion
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, with a considerable increase, this number reached
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1. 3
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billion
in twenty years. In 2030,
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population
growth in India
is predicted
to intersect with the figure for China which will be
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over
1. 4 million. Until 2050, this number is
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expected
to grow
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under 1. 6
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In terms of China, in 2000, the rate of
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in between 1. 2
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and 1. 3
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, and it rose to
moderately
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1. 4
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in 2020. From this date to 2030, this rate
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and
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IELTS academic The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

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