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The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country by age and location of residence in 2016

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country by age and location of residence in 2016 6DwK
The given line graph provides data regarding how the changes occured in percentage of utilisation of public transport by age and destination of residence in 2016. Overall it can be clearly seen that Large city residents experienced an upward trend while the amount of other residents was tiny According to the graph people with 16-30 Large city residents accounted for nearly 50 % about riding public transport. Other residents only in such age saw a slight increase. The percentage of Large city residents continued to rise, as a result, It reached a peak, making up just above 60%. Other residents aged 31-45 was a slight decline in usage of transport, accounting for 12%. The gap continued to become wider. Interestingly, Large city residents decreased sharply to 10 %. Among age groups in both of residents indicated a big dicrepency whereas 75 and over followed a similar pattern.
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of public transport by age and destination of residence in 2016.
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experienced an upward trend while the amount of other
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was tiny According to the graph
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with 16-30
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accounted for
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continued to rise,
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above 60%. Other
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aged 31-45 was a slight decline in usage of transport, accounting for 12%. The gap continued to become wider.
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,
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city
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decreased
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indicated a
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whereas 75 and over followed a similar pattern.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country by age and location of residence in 2016

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