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The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the level of joblessness of femal in England, Scotland, Wales, Nothern Ireland, in 2013 and 2014. Overall, over two years period, a general trend show that there was a small declined in female unemployment rates in the four countries, except in Scotland. In the year of 2013, England had the highest women unemployment rates, accounted for 6, 8%. And the percentage of women who were unemployed had decreased slightly by 0, 3% in 2014. In the same period, there were 5, 4% of female being jobless in Wales, and it fell by 0, 4% from 5, 4% to 5% in the year after. Between 2013 and 2014, Northern Ireland had the most significant decrease in the the level of women unemployed, from 5, 6% to 4, 6 %. Furthermore, it had the least female unemployment rates in the 4 countries in the UK. On the other hand, the proportion of female who were jobless rose by 0, 6%, made it to be the highest level of unployed of female.
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unemployment rates in the four countries, except in Scotland. In the year of 2013, England had the highest women unemployment rates, accounted for 6, 8%. And the percentage of women who
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being jobless in Wales, and it fell by 0, 4% from 5, 4% to 5% in the year after. Between 2013 and 2014, Northern Ireland had the most significant decrease in
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unemployment rates in the 4 countries in the UK.
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who were jobless rose by 0, 6%, made it to be the highest level of
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IELTS academic The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

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