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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005 7b25

The rendered line graph illustrates the information about the various air pollutant sources in UK between 1990 to 2005. The data has been calibrated in million tonnes. Overall, the eye striking features of graph are that total air pollutants showed an increasing trend in air pollution. However, households witnessed as lowest. To embark on, in 1990, the amount of total air pollutants was on peak point, recorded to 7 million tonnes, which sharply declined till the year 1999. It remained stable from 1999 to 2002. After 3 years, it recorded as more than 3 million tonnes. The amount of industry sources were 5. 5 million tonnes in the beginning. It declined gradually after 3 years. While in 1996, it was almost half of the initial year and passed through some flatuations, it reached on 2 million tonnes, at the end of 2005. Moving ahead, after examine some fluctuations, the amount of transport and household sources were less than 1 million tonnes, in 1990. After 6 years, it reached on 1 million tonnes and stabled till 2005. Whilst, households source followed the declining trend throughout the given time period.

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