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The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. N7ey
The pie charts demonstrate how the market was divided between four different transportations in the UK across 1965, 1985 and 2005 Overall, the private cars remained as the most popular transportation throughout the time and increased the most and occupied the largest proportion of the market, whereas the smallest amount of the market share went toward the recreational vehicles. Focusing on the private cars and the lorries and other commercial vehicles, while the former experienced continued growth from 40 % in 1965 to 60% 2005, the latter remained relatively stable as the number dropped 5 % to 20 % in 1985 and rose to 22% in 2005. In terms of lorries and other commercial vehicles and recreational vehicles, before the former's proportion halfed at 10% by 2005, it had similar amounts in 1965 and 1985. In contrast, recreational vehicles' share dropped from 15% then grew back to 8% in 2005.
The pie charts demonstrate how the market
was divided
between four
different
transportations in the UK across 1965, 1985 and 2005

Overall
, the private cars remained as the most popular transportation throughout the time and increased the most and occupied the largest proportion of the market, whereas the smallest amount of the market share went toward the recreational vehicles.

Focusing on the private cars and the lorries and other commercial vehicles, while the former experienced continued growth from 40 % in 1965 to 60% 2005, the latter remained
relatively
stable as the number dropped 5 % to 20 % in 1985 and rose to 22% in 2005.

In terms of lorries and other commercial vehicles and recreational vehicles,
before
the former's proportion
halfed
at 10% by 2005, it had similar amounts in 1965 and 1985.
In contrast
, recreational vehicles' share dropped from 15% then grew back to 8% in 2005.
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IELTS academic The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005.

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4 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
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