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The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. V3GD
The pie charts provide information about the qualify of postgraduate Canadians possess degree fields between different a group of ages, which are 25 to 35, also 45 to 55. Overall, the classification consists of nine different areas, as well as the youngest group’s participants are more than older group. Moreover, the percentages close to each other without two field, that are called Science, Maths, Computers and Engineering. Regarding the graphs, the category of social science, arts is the first preferring compared with the other 8 classes. Therefore, the data’ numbers are 20% and over twenty from twenty-five to thirty-five and other group of people respectively; additionally, the statistics have remained stabilize. On the other hand, the least chocises are the other, MBA, also humanities categories, which are all of them under the 10 percents. The column of MBA has an increased significantly statistic, that is doubled. Both other and humanities are decreased dramatically in the old-aged people.
The pie charts provide information about
the qualify
of postgraduate Canadians possess degree fields between
different
a
group
of ages, which are 25 to 35,
also
45 to 55.

Overall
, the classification consists of nine
different
areas,
as well
as the youngest
group’s
participants are more than older
group
.
Moreover
, the percentages close to each
other
without two
field
, that
are called
Science,
Maths
, Computers and Engineering.

Regarding the graphs, the category of social science, arts is the
first
preferring compared with the
other
8 classes.
Therefore
, the data’ numbers are 20% and over twenty from twenty-five to thirty-five and
other
group
of
people
respectively
;
additionally
, the statistics have remained stabilize.

On the
other
hand, the least
chocises
are the
other
, MBA,
also
humanities categories, which are all of them under the 10 percents. The column of MBA has an increased
significantly
statistic, that
is doubled
. Both
other
and humanities
are decreased
dramatically
in the
old
-aged
people
.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.

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