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The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart indicates monthly expenditures in dollars of a family in the U. S. A on three items in 2010. Overall, every items has a number of variations. The first month is January. Food was the top of the chart for monthly expenditure at nearly 500 dollars. Gas was around 310, and clothing was about 220 dollars. The second month is February. Food once again was on the top of the bar chart with approximately 580 dollars for monthly spending. Gas on the other hand had diminished almost to 215 dollars. However, clothing had increased around to 570 dollars. The third month is March. Food was sill on the top of the bar chart at nearly 440 dollars. Gas was 350 and clothing was e30 dollars respectively The fourht and the last month is April. Although, food was on the top in last montus. However it had decreased apprxomitely to 300 dollars. There was a noticeable difference in gas and in clothing to 580 and 640 dollars respectively.
The bar
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chart
indicates monthly expenditures in
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dollars
of a family in the U. S. A on three items in 2010.

Overall
, every
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items
has a number of variations.

The
first
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month
is January.
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Food
was the
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top
of the
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chart
for monthly expenditure at
nearly
500
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dollars
.
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Gas
was around 310, and clothing was about 220 dollars.

The second
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month
is February.
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Food
once again was on the
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top
of the bar
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chart
with approximately 580
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dollars
for monthly spending.
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Gas
on the other hand
had diminished almost to 215
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dollars
.
However
, clothing had increased around to 570 dollars.

The third
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month
is March.
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Food
was sill on the
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top
of the bar
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chart
at
nearly
440
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dollars
.
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Gas
was 350 and clothing was e30
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dollars
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respectively


The
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fourht
and the last
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month
is April.
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Although
,
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food
was on the
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top
in last
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montus
.
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However
it had decreased
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apprxomitely
to 300
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dollars
. There was a noticeable difference in
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gas
and in clothing to 580 and 640
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dollars
respectively
.

IELTS academic The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
169 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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