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The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. 1qGM

The bar chart indicates monthly expenditures in dollars of a family in the U. S. A on three items in 2010. Overall, every items has a number of variations. The first month is January. Food was the top of the chart for monthly expenditure at nearly 500 dollars. Gas was around 310, and clothing was about 220 dollars. The second month is February. Food once again was on the top of the bar chart with approximately 580 dollars for monthly spending. Gas on the other hand had diminished almost to 215 dollars. However, clothing had increased around to 570 dollars. The third month is March. Food was sill on the top of the bar chart at nearly 440 dollars. Gas was 350 and clothing was e30 dollars respectively The fourht and the last month is April. Although, food was on the top in last montus. However it had decreased apprxomitely to 300 dollars. There was a noticeable difference in gas and in clothing to 580 and 640 dollars respectively.

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 of a family in the U. S. A on three items in 2010.

Overall
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items
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Food
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top
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Gas
 was around 310, and clothing was about 220 dollars.

The second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 is February. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
Food
 once again was on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfinestdominantpreeminentleadingprimaryexcellent
top
 of the bar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
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 with approximately 580 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 for monthly spending. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
Gas
on the other hand
 had diminished almost to 215 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
. However
, clothing had increased around to 570 dollars.

The third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 is March. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
Food
 was sill on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfinestdominantpreeminentleadingprimaryexcellent
top
 of the bar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
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 at nearly
 440 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
Gas
 was 350 and clothing was e30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
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respectively


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month
 is April. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
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food
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However
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apprxomitely
 to 300 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
. There was a noticeable difference in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 and in clothing to 580 and 640 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
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respectively
. 