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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today O2Kj

he given plan below shows the map of grange park which was opened in 1920 in public and how it remains in present time. Overall, there is a noticeable change and a lot of renovations happened. Grange park was built in 1920, it has a rectangular shape and can be found in the north of Arnold avenue and South of Eldon street. To begin with, in 1920, Grange park has 5 seats that be found on each other side corner of the park and also 3 rose gardens which are located beside these chair but today, a wide rose garden is situated in the middle of the park just Infront of the entrance, wherein chairs are surrounded on this area. Furthermore, previously, there is a pond for water plants sited in the corner of north east of Arnold avenue and a glass house that is positioned in the south east of eldon street but due to renovations this pond became a children’s play area and a water feature. In today, Additional entrance can be found alongside with eldon street also underground car park is available.

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park
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 in 1920 in public and how it remains in present time.

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park
was built
 in 1920, it has a rectangular shape and can be found
 in the north of Arnold avenue and South of Eldon street.

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park
 and also
 3 rose gardens which are located
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but
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today
, a wide rose garden is situated
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park
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 on this area. Furthermore
, previously, there is a pond for water plants sited in the corner of This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 of Arnold avenue and a glass This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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south east
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 due to renovations this pond became a children’s play area and a water feature. In This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, Additional entrance can be found
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park
 is available. 