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The graph below show the proportion of holiday to different destinations which were taken as package holidays by UK residents. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of holidays to distinct locations which were chosen as package holidays by UK citizens from 1993 to 2007. Looking from an perspective, it have tendency to go down. The propotion of such holidays to all other countries are most popular. However, the package holidays were to North America no longer popular, reduced from 35% to 30%. From 1993 to 2001, with slight fluctuations in between, from over 50 to less than 70%. After that, the percentage of holiday remaind fairly satble between 2001 and 2007. However, the percentage of time spent on vacation were to Europe dropped significantlyt between 1999 and 2007. It decrease from just above 55% to just under 40%. Finally, It is also worth noting that the percentage of break were to North America. In 1996, the percentage peaked. In addition, It fluctuated between 30 and 40% from 2001 to 2007.

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 by UK citizens from 1993 to 2007.

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 between 2001 and 2007. However
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Finally
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 worth noting that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
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, It fluctuated between 30 and 40% from 2001 to 2007. 