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THE GRAPH BELOW SHOW THE NUMBER OF TOURIST VISTING A PARTICULAR CARIBBEAN ISLAND BETWEEN 2010 AND 2017.

THE GRAPH BELOW SHOW THE NUMBER OF TOURIST VISTING A PARTICULAR CARIBBEAN ISLAND BETWEEN 2010 AND 2017. 8d8Xl
THE PROVIDED LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE AMOUNT OF VISITORS VISITS A SPECIFIC CARIBBEAN ISLAND OVER THE PERIOD OF 7 YEARS FROM 2010 TO 2017. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN MILLIONS. OVERALL, THE TOTAL NUMBER OF TRAVELERS INCREASES DRASTICALLY WHEREAS, THE VISITOR STAYING ON ISLAND FALLS NEGLIGIBLY IN GIVEN PERIOD. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE DIGIT FOR TOURIST STAY ON CRUISE SHIP BEGINS FROM AROUND 0. 25 WHICH, INCLINES TO 0. 5 IN 2011 AND FALLS TO SIMILAR NUMBERS WHERE IT STARTS. IN 2013, IT IS ACCOUNTED FOR HALF MILLION WHICH, ROSES TO 1. 0 IN ONE YEAR AND EXPERIENCED A TWO FOLD ROSE IN 2017. MEANWHILE, VISITORS ON LIVING ON ISLAND STARTS FROM AROUND 0. 75 WHICH, REMAINS CONSTANT TILL 2011 AND INCREASES TO 1. 5 IN 2013. IN 2014, IT START DROP DRAMATICALY TO 1. 25 IN 2016 AND IT ENDS WITH 1. 5 IN FINAL PERIOD. THE LINE GRAPH FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE TOTAL AMOUNT OF TRAVELERS STATING ON PARTICULAR CARIBBEAN ISLAND COMMENCE WITH EXACT 1. 0, IT INCREASES SLIGHTLY TO 1. 25 IN 2011 AND SKYROCKETED TO 2. 0 IN NEXT TWO YEAR. IN FIFTH YEAR, IT IS ACCOUNTED FOR 2. 5 WHICH, ELEVATED NEGLIGIBLY TO 2. 75 IN 2015 AND REMAINS CONSTANT FOR NEXT YEAR. THEN, IT EXPERIENCED THE HIKE TO 3. 5 IN 2017.
THE PROVIDED LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE AMOUNT OF VISITORS VISITS A SPECIFIC CARIBBEAN
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ISLAND
OVER THE PERIOD OF 7 YEARS FROM 2010 TO 2017. THE UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN MILLIONS.

OVERALL
, THE TOTAL NUMBER OF TRAVELERS INCREASES
DRASTICALLY
WHEREAS, THE VISITOR STAYING ON
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ISLAND
FALLS
NEGLIGIBLY
IN
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GIVEN
PERIOD.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE DIGIT FOR TOURIST STAY ON CRUISE SHIP
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BEGINS
FROM AROUND 0. 25 WHICH, INCLINES TO 0. 5 IN 2011 AND FALLS TO SIMILAR NUMBERS WHERE IT
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STARTS
. IN 2013, IT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR HALF MILLION WHICH, ROSES TO 1. 0 IN ONE
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YEAR
AND EXPERIENCED A
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TWO FOLD
ROSE IN 2017. MEANWHILE, VISITORS ON LIVING ON
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ISLAND
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STARTS
FROM AROUND 0. 75 WHICH, REMAINS CONSTANT TILL 2011 AND INCREASES TO 1. 5 IN 2013. IN 2014, IT
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START
DROP
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DRAMATICALY
TO 1. 25 IN 2016 AND IT ENDS WITH 1. 5 IN FINAL PERIOD.

THE LINE GRAPH
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE TOTAL AMOUNT OF TRAVELERS STATING ON PARTICULAR CARIBBEAN
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ISLAND
COMMENCE WITH EXACT 1. 0, IT INCREASES
SLIGHTLY
TO 1. 25 IN 2011 AND SKYROCKETED TO 2. 0 IN
NEXT
TWO
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YEAR
. IN FIFTH
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YEAR
, IT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 2. 5 WHICH, ELEVATED
NEGLIGIBLY
TO 2. 75 IN 2015 AND REMAINS CONSTANT FOR
NEXT
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YEAR
. THEN, IT EXPERIENCED THE HIKE TO 3. 5 IN 2017.

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