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The given pie chart compare the proportion of changes in the yearly spending by a specific United Kingdom school in 1981 1991 and 2001.

The given pie chart compare the proportion of changes in the yearly spending by a specific United Kingdom school in 1981 1991 and 2001. EwGmx
The given pie chart compare the proportion of changes in the yearly spending by a specific United Kingdom school in 1981 1991 and 2001. it is crystal clear, in the year 1981 as a record furniture and equipment accounted for 15% and experienced a threefold declined to 5% in the year 1991. moreover resources it compressed of 15% in 1981 which increased to 20% in 1991. spending on Teachers salary was 40% and inclined to 10% difference was observed to the end however expenditure on other works salary e was rose in 1981 and reduced in 1991 and it accounted for 28 % to 22% while in the case of insurance school spent only 2% in the 1981 and it accounted for 3%moving further in 2001 the former figure there was a difference of 1% between the resources and insurance which was accounted for 9% to 8% whereas the ratio of teachers salary was the highest in 2001 and it was accounted for 45 % moreover in 2001 UK school was spent 23% on furniture and equipment that was 8% more as compared to other work salary which was in 15%. overall it can be seen that UK school spent maximum money on the teachers salary as compared to other throughout the given time period
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in the yearly spending by a specific United Kingdom
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in 1981 1991 and 2001.
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, in the year 1981 as a record furniture and equipment
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for 15% and experienced a threefold declined to 5% in the year 1991.
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spending
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Teachers
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was 40% and inclined to 10% difference
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e was rose in 1981 and
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in 1991 and it
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for 28 % to 22% while in the case of insurance
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spent
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in 2001 the former figure there was a difference of 1% between the resources and insurance which was
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for 9% to 8% whereas the ratio of teachers
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was the highest in 2001 and it was
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for 45 %
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in 2001 UK
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that UK
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spent maximum money on the
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IELTS academic The given pie chart compare the proportion of changes in the yearly spending by a specific United Kingdom school in 1981 1991 and 2001.

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