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The bar chart shows the GDP of UK from 1992 to 2000

The bar chart shows the GDP of UK from 1992 to 2000 YwWpj
The given information in context to the gross domestic product from IT and Service industry of the UK between 1992 to 2000 is depicted by bar graph On having a deep glance on the bar chart, it is clear that in 1992, IT sector and service sector contributed to the growth of GDP about 6 percent and 4 percent respectively. During the time period from 1994 to 1996, IT sector showed similar trend, while the figure of service industry was near about 6. 2 to 6. 5 percent in the same years.
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information in context to the gross domestic product from IT and Service industry of the UK
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between 1992 to 2000
is depicted
by bar graph
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On
having a deep glance on the bar chart, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that in 1992, IT sector and service sector contributed to the growth of GDP about 6 percent and 4 percent
respectively
. During the time period from 1994 to 1996, IT sector
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showed
similar trend, while the figure of service industry was near about 6. 2 to 6. 5 percent in the same years.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the GDP of UK from 1992 to 2000

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